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by Daniel Frank

Final Rating: 3.00. Finished 236 out of 310 entries.

393 views including the voting period.


Animator: Daniel Frank

Description: This is my 11 Second Club entry that I had to do for school.

Experience: About 3 months

Time taken: About 2 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Fernando Incetta:

Nice WIP! The essence is there, and so are some poses. I think you should work a little bit more in the blocking process, and not rely too much in the software automatic splines. Congratulations, and keep it up.

Craig Joseph Massa:

with lo of the movements that the daughter is making, it draws away the attention from the person who is actually speaking, just keep an eye out there. You always want the viewers eye to go in the direction of where the MAIN action is happening.

Marcella D.:

Facial expressions could be worked on more here, and the characters definitely have a slow movement.

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Okay, the movements are moving at a too regular slow pacing, kinda like they are under water, the daughter acts more like she is checking her manucure rather than being upset at an alcoholism problem. The mother hardly shows she is upset. I say balance more of the energy in the movements.

Richard Adams:

Way too floaty. A sure sign you're relying too much on the computer to do inbetweening.

Jelany Andujar:

Good job animating this. BUT only if the characters reactions and lips sync wasn't so slow/off with what they were saying it would've been way better.