Comments:
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Maryline Chemoula:
It's hard to concentrate on the animation when Bonnie is ....sparkling that way. I love Mery but her elbow seems a little too high when she points at her soup.I also think she reacts too quickly at he end. I also love Bonnie but the hands needs more work . Keep it up !
Marcella D.:
The light is a bit of a distraction, but the characters flow very nicely.
Gaucelm De Villaret:
Fitting enough. Good enough angles. It has the right idea, but it kinda lacks in energy and finesse.
Fernando Incetta:
Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.
Monica Stringer:
pretty decent animation, well timed and expressive. The lip sync doesn't really work well near the end for the daughter and that could probably be tightened up a bit.
Animator: Julian Tan
Description: A girl is curious if her soup contains alcohol.
Experience: 2 years 9 months
Time taken: 3 weeks