Michael Whitley:

I like your idea, guess you just needed more time

Marcella D.:

I would love to see this finished

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Maybe you have a cool idea, but you can barely see the execution here. There isn't animation, it's more of an animatic.

Richard Adams:

Terrific story idea, just feels very unfinished in execution.

Rebekah Ryan:

The idea is clear and I think its an interesting way to approach the quote! The arm movements are a bit jerky to me but the addition of a couple of more inbetweens could remedy it.

Monica Stringer:

as for a completed animation... this is not one. Rough draft? yes, and a promising one. I'm a bit disappointed I didn't get to see what this could become.