Ariyanto Zulkifli:

Nice try btw.
but still lacking fundamental. keep practicing and shoot some reference to help. And careful with camera movement. Better to use still camera if you don't know what to do with it. Keep practicing, you'll getting better soon.

Gaucelm De Villaret:

There is a little of something that could work here, but it's still too stiff and borderline robotic...

Connor Leuck:

strange camera translations

Sthefany Briceño:

great idea but need to work more on the eyebrows and on your facial expressions keep it up