Comments:
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Sabrina Winkel:
Needs a lot of improvement. I need to see more from the other character and more facial expression from the mom
Sharkhead:
It needs better timing, and you could also exagerated it a little more to get more beautiful poses and silhuets.
Marcella D.:
The eye's are definitely not having any reacting to the situation. Please, use the rig's eyes to your advantage.
Sarah Schulze:
The Idea is there, I like it. You may want to work more on the lipsync :)
Charlie Abb:
Decent animation. Story is a little bland. Great background.
Gaucelm De Villaret:
Although it's too bad we hardly see the daughter, the mother emotes well enough. There is a good balance of expressions, in my opinion.
Mark Hanson:
boredom defined
Fernando Incetta:
Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.
Jelany Andujar:
great job. but the only thing that throws me off is in the beginning when she moves the cup forward, move that frame a little behind before the audio begins
Monica Stringer:
the headshake could be faster and the expressions can be more exaggerated, but good work :)
Animator: Tiffany
Description: Suspicions arise when Mother offers Honey a drink.
Experience: 3 months
Time taken: 2 weeks