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The Alcohol Conundrum

by Tiffany

Final Rating: 3.70. Finished 149 out of 310 entries.

399 views including the voting period.


Animator: Tiffany

Description: Suspicions arise when Mother offers Honey a drink.

Experience: 3 months

Time taken: 2 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Sabrina Winkel:

Needs a lot of improvement. I need to see more from the other character and more facial expression from the mom


It needs better timing, and you could also exagerated it a little more to get more beautiful poses and silhuets.

Marcella D.:

The eye's are definitely not having any reacting to the situation. Please, use the rig's eyes to your advantage.

Sarah Schulze:

The Idea is there, I like it. You may want to work more on the lipsync :)

Charlie Abb:

Decent animation. Story is a little bland. Great background.

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Although it's too bad we hardly see the daughter, the mother emotes well enough. There is a good balance of expressions, in my opinion.

Mark Hanson:

boredom defined

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.

Jelany Andujar:

great job. but the only thing that throws me off is in the beginning when she moves the cup forward, move that frame a little behind before the audio begins

Monica Stringer:

the headshake could be faster and the expressions can be more exaggerated, but good work :)