Final Rating: 3.53. Finished 171 out of 310 entries.

410 views including the voting period.


Animator: Jose Ramon Hernandez Flores

Description: The perfect example of what a good mother is... or not?

Experience: I am an animation student

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Gaucelm De Villaret:

Characters standing still, narrow camera angle and we don't see the alcohol thing? That's not good. But the mother's expressions feel dignified and has restrained expression that I like.


Your Mery is very robotic

Craig Joseph Massa:

When doing your holds, make them moving holds. Not just a flat, statue hold. When you have the statue holds, the movements look very robotic.

Ramon Arango:

pose to pose to pose... try to make more interesting transitions and you always dead hold the poses but usually every bodypart stays in motion at all times. try also offsetting things like hips to torso or head to hands etc to get variety

Connor Leuck:

There needs to be something that has alcohol in the scene.

Marcella D.:

The mother's movement need some improvement, but not bad

Michael Kristiansen:

A little stiff to look at. More secondary animation would suit it. Key every controller, if not an important one, then just a tiny bit to give some feel that they are alive.

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.

S J Bennett:

Acting beats are good! Would have been great to see this polished.