Final Rating: 3.62. Finished 159 out of 310 entries.

387 views including the voting period.


Animator: Evan Martin

Description: ...

Experience: Student

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Sabrina Winkel:

Lip sync is the biggest problem. But it's good though!

Marcella D.:

The mother lip movement need improvement.

Kevin Cooper:

It looks like you didn't have time to finish. The first shot looks fluid. But the second shot looks like it was still in the blocking stage. The camera angles are good. Think a the story a little bit. Why is there a kid at a bar? Might make more sense if the setting was different.

Isaac Holzwarth:

the lip syncing could use some work, and the girl could have some other actions while the mom is talking. Also, the mom seems kind of wooden, if you know what I mean. Still pretty good though.

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose to make it look less "floaty". Good luck.

Jelany Andujar:

Great animation ! BUT the only thing that really got to me was the lip sync, maybe next time work on making them look like they are the ones talking.

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Has good basis, but a bit empty in the execution.