Final Rating: 5.26. Finished 38 out of 310 entries.

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Animator: Jabir Dz

Description: Interaction between JANE and her MOTHER. she looked about her in confusion..

Experience: 2 Years

Time taken: 4 days

Comments:

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Craig Joseph Massa:

Love the movements of the characters! VERY well done.

I think the camera moves around a bit too much though... Disorienting at times. I think the scene would have been fine if there wasn't any cuts, just the 1 scene.

Jordan Lewers:

You have a really good grasp of fluidity in your movements, particularly when the girl on the left punches Bonnie's cheeks! Bonnie, however, rocks back and forth a bit too much in the beginning, with the poses feeling redundant

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Characters are more like bouncing and moving from one pose to the other quickly... feels unnatural and kinda forced.

Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui:

nice work

Ed Purves:

Looks like the girl is in The Life Aquatic outfit :)

Naveen Mohan:

Excellent timing and acting..keep going

Fernando Incetta:

Good work! It needs tome tweaking here and there bit overall is a solid piece of animations. Congratulations.

Kevin Cooper:

The camera cuts are distracting. They disrupt the flow of the piece. Keep the viewer's eye focused on your action.