Comments:
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Laurie Bick:
Animation seems floaty
Howard Cameron:
Becareful of the timing.
Bivek Dawadi:
very good
Carolyn Merklein:
could have stood some camera work - the 1st guy does not read. Great subtly on the 2nd guy.
Animator: Napat Tabkhan
Description: Malcolm and Ray were enjoying their time, until someone sneaks in and watch what they're doing. Malcolm knows it's going to be Franklin, the same guy who always sneak in while he's playing card game.
Experience: 8 Months
Time taken: 1 month