Final Rating: 3.41. Finished 144 out of 195 entries.

485 views including the voting period.


Animator: Psm Micheal Jackson

Description: Two friends are arguing.

Experience: Student

Time taken: 3 weeks


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Howard Cameron:

Broke the continuity on the 2nd shot. The guy sitting down should still have his arms out.

Emmeline Pui Ling Dobson:

Gestures are strong but are repeated. The camera "crosses the line" every time it cuts. (Both characters are speaking facing to the right. It's standard practice to have one character speaking to the right, the other speaking to the left.)


Need to take care about good poses.Little more observations are required. Any way not looking bad. Carry onnnnnnnn.


could do with some more slow ins and slow outs


Looks like a classic case of 'no reference' here. As in, not terribly animated, but feels unnatural because you're going with generic arm movements instead of finding what movements would fit the audio through filming yourself or others. I'd really recommend you try it for your next entry.