Howard Cameron:

Looks like most of the work was spend on the first character. The opening shot is surprisingly good. The second character needs some more TLC especially with the hand

Brian W.:

Expressive acting, but floaty movements.

Lea:

I love the first expression! The rest is a little floaty though.

Carolyn Merklein:

nice gestures, though they into each other awkwardly - though i'm not sure if that was intentional.

Aravind:

i could not get your concept