Brett:

Your lip sync could use another pass, it feels a bit off.

Howard Cameron:

The lips seem a bit off. But not bad at all

Lea:

Your camera cuts are too glitchy. A simple cut is all you need.

Rhian:

The lipsync doesn't quite work on the brown blob when he says 'are you up to something' but I love the expressions and attitude from the characters. The motions are awesome - just the lipsync.. that could be done better, with more defined mouth shapes (look at Aaron Blaise lipsync tutorial on youtube)