Brett:

I would have made that table a bit thinner that way you could pull the camera in closer and still have everything in frame, as it is now you can't see detail from so far away.

Brian W.:

POV motion is effective and not overdone.

Napat Tabkhan:

This is a nice animation and story telling, some of them in the end are kind of snappy, but overall, it looks good for me. I would try to open his mouth more while he's talking, that would help the viewer to see the word he said more clear.