Comments:
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shark:
so so.
Howard Cameron:
Oh geeze haha!
staging is perfect!
but sadly the same facial expression is what breaks the believability. This is still really good!
Brian W.:
Fun, but very limited. Not much animation going on. Good artwork.
John McSwiggin:
Not sure what to make of this... Good animation none-the-less.
Sabrina Winkel:
Haha this is funny! Very unique and creative but please make it appropriate for audiences. You can get I trouble for that
Frank Geadah:
lol!!!
Kinnei:
I'm sure someone will have said it but . . . The rules, "Copyrighted . . . character designs will not be allowed in entries unless the entrant has the right to use the . . . design" also, "Don't use anything overtly offensive (this is not the place for crude sexual humor . . .)"
As for the actual animation I would really like to see more movement and more facial expressions - exaggeration is key. You have good drawings and understand basic motion, which is a good starting place.
Animator: Michael Arca Sedda
Description: The Italian brothers are fighting over the same woman!
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 10 days