Petr J.:

I like the secondary actions going around. The ear bounce on frame 113 seems to be unappropriate. Nice work :)

Fernando Incetta:

Good one. Polishing the lip sync would add a lot to your acting.

George John Bowden:

I like this one however I feel there could be some improvement. I had to watch this a few times to really appreciate it, however the first watch felt rather jarring. Im not sure if it was the overlapping action was too much on the head pieces and then not enough on the arms of the larger character. And I felt the hat falling off was not anticipated enough or wasn't appreciated by the characters. It was pointed out and is obvious but doesn't lead anywhere , if that makes sense. But some really nice work! :-)

Raevynne 'Mei' Vile:

Awesome timing and arcs. I love the acting choices you made. Good camera angles. Keep up the good work!