Final Rating: 6.82. Finished 6 out of 139 entries.

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Animator: Jordan Barg

Description: An old friend comes to visit his lonely former partner to mentor the future prospects of the police department.

Experience: 3 years as a student

Time taken: 1 month


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Jordan Barg:

it's alright i guess

Zach Savaglio:

I like how you switch the angles around! Good way to keep things moving!

Jason Daves:

The acting is great.



Niko Frenkenberger:

11 seconds and I know exactly what the scene is about, the personality of both and everything packed in smoothly animated goodness. I see a winner here :)

Fernando Incetta:

Very good. Nice staging and acting choices, there's a lot of personality conveyed.

Raevynne 'Mei' Vile:

Wonderful acting choices, great arcs

Leo Leung:

just noticed one thing, when he says : comfor.dable there, at 167. Both guys changes poses almost at the exact same time, it feels strange and too staged. Pretty sweet though

Chris Schildt:

I like the implied context of them being old pals from the force and the environmental cues to set the story. The fat guy was married, lost his wife, then most recent or pertinent he is good buds with the other cop. Maybe the fat guy retired or was fired? Is the cop offering to give him his badge back or is he mockingly flashing his authority to suggest the fat guy doesn't have a choice in the matter? All seem reasonable and interesting for the dialogue, but make it difficult to get a feel for what is being conveyed in the acting. Either way I like what you've done :)