Comments:
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Zach Savaglio:
Very choppy movements. That's the first thing you should work on.
Fernando Incetta:
I'm taking that this is a WIP so I won't look too far into the animation. What is with the framing? There doesn't seem to be a reason to have them off-centered.
Raevynne 'Mei' Vile:
Interesting character choice! I hope you finish it!
James Daggs:
This is clearly unfinished. It just looks like you uploaded the rough key poses, added a low resolution backdrop and nothing else.
Animator: alicia obredor
Description: they are two characters that go in a car and go talking
Experience: student 11 months ago
Time taken: one and a half weeks