Frank J. Warsinski:

With the quality of work that went into this one character, I would have liked to have seen another character and an exploration of the dynamic interaction between the two.

Zach Savaglio:

The expressions are what you should work on overall.

Petr J.:

The timing works quite well. Lacks story and character.

padel:

would like to see the 1st carachter as well, at least once.

Fernando Incetta:

I understand the limitations of this style, but still you could have chosen something else than framing just the face in the middle.