Comments:
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Fernando Incetta:
Splining needs a lot of work, it's very floaty right now. Emphazise the facial acting more, specially at that distance.
Tasha Howe:
The left guy seems to be missing an eyebrow. Splines need a lot more refinement but can tell the thought processes you are trying to communicate. improving the timing and even stronger posing will help you alot.
Animator: John Tyson
Description: A nice conversation takes an awkward turn when one guy's not into the plan.
Experience: A few classes in college and 4 previous entries here.
Time taken: 8.5 Hours