Zach Savaglio:

Good arm movements, but I would like to have see a camera angle facing the guy with glasses. One angle makes an animation seem a bit dull in my thinking.

Jason Daves:

Nice acting. Lower the key on your colors perhaps.

Petr J.:

I like the line of the eyebrows. (Could be maybe reversed once)

Fernando Incetta:

Great. Nice facial expression and I like the style, funny and vivid but subtle.
This may be nitpicking but I don't think the punchline works. We as audience don't know he is naked because of the framing, but the gym guy can see him all the time.

Anyways, nice job. Good contender for top 11.

Raevynne 'Mei' Vile:

Hahaha that's a funny take on the audio! I love the red shirt guy's eye movements. Keep up the good work