Comments:
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Hadas Rosen:
You're starting to het some cool acting and staging in there, but your cuts are all over the place! Keep it to 1-3 shots for something of this length!
Mostafa Barakat:
Very Blocky and no lip-sync.
Kimberly Holbrook:
Way too many cuts that disorient the viewer. It makes it difficult to watch the animation itself.
Elisabeth Janerka:
A shame it is so poorly lit. Keep it simple and maybe don't have lights in the scene
Natj:
There could be a bit more lighting so it's easier to see the characters.
Animator: Nicolas leal
Description: my first animation
Experience: not
Time taken: one month