Comments:
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Jamie F:
Liked the gag!
Hadas Rosen:
Fun scenario, but the compositions are confusing. You need an establishing shot!
Eric Bai:
right after power theres a short freeze but other than that good job no bumps
Laajaj Nassim:
I think, in the fist shot, the key poses are too much visible/ accentuated and pushed too far (80 to 120). Maybe self reference video can help to make it more subtle and natural.
Gokul Dev:
nice *
Sasa Rodrz:
You should try a lot less poses so the audio can sync in, and your idea can read better
Animator: Jed B.
Description: A broken man is swindled out of some sweet cash.
Experience: 5 years
Time taken: 1-2 weeks