John M:

I like this character. The Smoking of the cigarette is good. Shame we couldn't see a second character.

Ivan Mendoza:

Lip sync needs work.

Hadas Rosen:

Looks nice, but is a bit floaty. Pop on the accents, even if he is a languid character!

Fred:

Beautiful. The fingers of his left hand are hovering above the table... They should be resting on the table; at least in the second half of the shot. A nitpicky thing, but that's what we're here for :)

Leonardo Pereira:

Nice acting choices. Check the lip sync in the last part.

Gokul Dev:

nice *

Eimante Zelvyte:

It's quite good, lip sync could use some more work, but you're on the right path!