John M:

A good start but no lip sync or second character severely lets this down.

Hadas Rosen:

The volumes change every frame, and a two frame breath cycle isn't enough for it to feel right. Don't be afraid to draw a lot!

Divina Gracia:

drawing is good, but the animation needs more improvement. maybe you can add lips movement and eye expression rather tahn just moving his shoulder

Charlie Rose:

I like the character design quite a lot, but it really should have been six different frames.

Elisabeth Janerka:

Nice potential, but the way his shoulder tangents with the background is distracting to look at