Comments:
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YewChung Wong:
Good job on the facial! however, i think holding the handkerchief with two hand to wipe face looks a little unnatural to me.
Michael Loeck:
Great work! lots of subtle things going on here that make it stand out for me.
Daniel Vasconcellos:
Super good, great idea and execution!
Richard Adams:
This actually turned out to be maybe the single best entry this month...Top Five for sure. Hard work paid off!
Aaron James Mongcopa:
Good acting and I also like the mood of your scene.
Eli Bastiaens:
Absolutely love the acting and the staging! And the interaction between the hands and the face are really impressive!
Jamie F:
lovely
Carlos Guadarrama:
A really interesting concept!
Miguel R. C.:
I love the delicate touch that you gave to your animation, very well polished! My only comment is on the lips sync and the shapes of the mouth, I think they go too far in some parts (around 140, 210 and 246), I would tone down that a bit, it gets on the way of the mood you are trying to convey.
I also like the piece of cloth, I would love to hear how you animated that!
Edmond Toussaint:
top 3
Elisabeth Janerka:
Nice animation, but the setup doesn't make sense
Animator: John Aurthur Mercader
Description: I wanted to go for a loss of innocence, or a broken dream sort of subtext. the contrast with the lyrics spoken in first person felt strong. had so much fun with this one! first entry ever, so I hope you guys like it!
Experience: 7 years (as a 3D Generalist)
Time taken: 5 days