John Aurthur Mercader:

This has some great promise. Keep pushing your poses and try and take a video of yourself doing this. It will make worlds of a difference

Joshua:

Great scene set up

Carlos Guadarrama:

Nice performance. You've got some poses that feel like they hit a wall and stop moving, remember to overshoot your quick transitions and slow in if it's a slow transition. Nice performance overall. I'd tighten up the lipsync at "home.. in the early morning". The rest of the sync feels nice.