John Aurthur Mercader:

Hey nice work, i love the choreography for this one, but i think it wouldve been much better to really push your inbetweens. Like in the twirl, could really pose the limbs and bag better to create clear archs to really sell that twirl. Also have a mirror on your table, helps alot whwn youre lipsynching. But over all this ones quite nice :)

Carlos Guadarrama:

Polish the camera so the movement doesn't feel so sudden, and I'd give it a lipsync polish pass, some of it seems off. Love the performance.