Comments:
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Justin D:
Could use some better camera planning; crosses the stageline a few times, which confusingly swaps what side of the screen the characters are on.
Richard Adams:
You have some good poses here and terrific facial expressiveness and body language. Work on improving your polishing; the movement from Pose A to Pose B. Good acting choices.
Animator: Vishva Jayasooriya
Description: Had fun animating the short audio. looking forward to enter again.
Experience: beginner.
Time taken: five days.