Comments:
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Richard Adams:
Lacks fundamentals. Go study up on "The 12 Principles of Animation" on Youtube, will help your work a lot.
Christian Stewart:
Try to add more expression in the characters.
Dan Boot:
love the concept but needs more lip syncing or body emoting
Animator: Hunter Yoak
Description: A spider leaves out a piece of pie as a reward for mending socks. When she sees a fly land on her plate, she threatens him with a swatter.
Experience: 6 Months
Time taken: 40 Hours