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You cant just break my apartment

by fauzannf

Final Rating: 2.34. Finished 192 out of 193 entries.

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Animator: fauzannf

Description: two people who are arguing because one entered the room through the window

Experience: 2 months

Time taken: 5 hours

Comments:

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Ashley Ulbrich:

Very good start, but I'd make sure to show more of the characters moving. When you stick your arm out, for example, you subconsciously lean to counteract the shift of weight. By filming reference, you can capture a lot of these changes and show a lot of personality. I'd also recommend showing both characters' faces/mouths because this is a dialogue-animating competition. Great work overall though!