Comments:
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Richard Adams:
Cuts would've worked better than those rapid pans from character to character. The pans were distracting. Or better yet, move camera back so both characters are in frame simultaneously.
Jay:
Good focus on the characters and window narrative! The whip pan and render stylisation is nice to see but to improve further, I'd exaggerate the poses further to match the dialogue's energy.
Animator: Prince abraham
Description: This scene is animated in Maya and rendered in Blender and it took about 3 to 4 days and 4 hours each to finish this project
used Maya character rigs
Ray and Jerry
Experience: a year
Time taken: 3 days