Joshua:

While I admire the dedication to making an extended shot for context, it makes the entire thing feel under done, I wonder if you could have done a lot more if you had only focused on just the section with the audio.

No one, or at least no reasonable animator is gonna hold it against you if your context is a little lacking due to the size and lack of clarity of the audio clip.

Hasan Alaydrus:

The first half is unnecessary

John Alston:

The syncing is off, and the added silence seems drawn out.

Dean Mosier:

The first 260 frames were not needed.