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Melanie Corrales:
Lighting and scene are done nicely. I'm a bit confused as to what the story is actually about -- I think simplifying your story or giving more indicators as to whats happening with your character animation could really help push your story and animation overall. Good work!
John Alston:
You can feel the deadline here. I think the lighting changes seem inorganic, and the film looks like it's designed to end before the end of the sound bite.
Animator: Daniel Herrmann
Description: Hey, i am a student and i need so long, because i have not so much expıerence in animation with keyframes. So it looks a bit slow. and i dont get the 11 seconds perfectly. :)
Experience: İ am a student. it ıs my first 11 seconds movie clip.
Time taken: 20 hours