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EmreCanDemirMayCompetition

by Emre Can

Final Rating: 4.21. Finished 59 out of 72 entries.

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Animator: Emre Can

Description: This is my May Competition work.
Emre Can Demir

Experience: 1

Time taken: 3

Comments:

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Alexis Gamber:

The movements look really smooth but the jesters need a purpose and intent behind them. Good work.

Ben Zingo:

the easing seems very linear, and some of the movements seem very sharp and abrupt. You're also falling into the classic mistake of over-acting and trying to gesture for every major word. Sometimes less is more! Focus on hitting a few key poses, and try acting it out yourself in a very relaxed manner

Vinking:

Nice work. Don't hesitate to put the characters closer to the camera. And it looks like some movements are fast and some other are slow : the animation is uneven on that aspect.