Comments:
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Ben Zingo:
your posing and some of the ideas are really nice, but the actual animation seems lacking. Maybe focus on the splines/easing, as well as adding in anticipation, overshoot, etc
Maylin Lazarova:
the timing of the movements and poses of the character on the left need a bit more work. the storytelling works quite well.
Animator: Mohamad Bakri
Description: don't tease me when i'm eating
Experience: 3 month using Maya
Time taken: 3 weeks