« Back to May Competition

You Should Have Ordered Fries...

by Matt Graham

Final Rating: 4.12. Finished 107 out of 197 entries.

29 views including the voting period.


Animator: Matt Graham

Description: A nosey patron at a local bistro sees a woman on a first date picking food off her dates plate while he is in the bathroom... snoodiness ensues...

Experience: 2 months

Time taken: 2 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Nik Ottinger:

cool use of eye direction :)

Michael D. Smith:

Too many sharp transitions in expression without proper emotional backing. poor acting.

Aaron Rivera:

Excellent expression and acting here! It's a little difficult to tell what the story is, since we don't see the woman and he acts rather surprised that she is there, but the animation itself is excellent! The lip sync does miss a few syllables, especially during "I'm going to have to think about this" but otherwise it's a good job.

Jesse J. Jones:

The transition from shocked to playing it cool seems strange, I would probably take the shocked pose out. Some good stuff though, could just use more weight, like pressing into the table or the chair.