Comments:
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Mattie Walsh:
The bodies seem a little too static at the start where it seems more complete. Nice drawings
Clement:
Would love to see this i you finish it!
Aaron Rivera:
Excellent work! I really like the acting and the style, it's just not complete. This is the start of something fantastic though. Nice job!
Grant Holden:
Up there for me! eating of the fish just made him a bit more sinister which I liked!
Jesse J. Jones:
Would like to see it finished, not a bad start though! :) The sitting down action needs some anticipation rather than just animating straight into it. Perhaps it would be stronger if he was sitting the whole time so he's not starting his line the very instance he's done sitting down.
Animator: Elzbieta
Description: Who will take the blame for the broken fish bowl?
Admittedly it's still rough, but I'm planning to continue working on it and just wanted to get some feedback.
Thanks for watching!
Experience: Bachelor's Degree
Time taken: 4 Days