Comments:
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Jesse J. Jones:
Movement is super floaty and feels like there's no weight to the characters. Work on your timing, posing, and having less tweens. There's also some elbow and shoulder popping going on that needs cleaned up.
Lucas Michaels:
Focus on your blocking, keep it natural. Think about the most important moments and really work it.
Animator: Stephan Rogers
Description: Followed the dialog
Experience: one 11 week class of animation
Time taken: 3 weeks