philipp seis:

maybe a bit too snappy

donna:

Love the staging!

Zacary Hutchinson:

Nice lighting and the animation is pretty nice too.

Michael D. Smith:

Nice. Using source filmmaker I'm guessing? Liked the lighting at the end.

Jesse J. Jones:

Great staging! I love the drama! Only critique I would have is I feel the woman's first head movement happens a few frames after the audio accent. Really terrific work here! :)

Cuck Man:

Nice camera angles. Just improve on that animation and you got a winner

Daniel Vasconcellos:

cool characters, nice cameras!

Danny Kneip:

Crazy style and angles! The blocking is good overall, but I don't believe he got to that doorway by 241 when he just passed in front of her at 229. His lip sync is stronger than hers. With some polishing, I think it's a really good piece for your portfolio!

Gary:

I dig the style you're going for, especially the last shot. The man moves well in his scenes, but the woman seems to stop suddenly into her poses. Give her head a little settle into each pose.

Dan Harriman:

Final shot is great! Good casting of rigs for both characters. 2nd last shot jolts the whole piece though.. if it was tighter and had less of a Dutch angle I think it wouldn't be distracting

Abhik Paul:

nice render