Jacob Moreno:

Good work. The animation of the girl at the beginning seems to fit the dialogue very well. Next try to focus on transitions from the poses; it's simply a matter of adding life to the characters rather than having moments where the characters are stuck in place. The camera work is okay. The cuts at the end are nice. Good work.

Aanal Kumar:

timing is bad!!!!!! and composition is also not good. try to work on that!!!!

Jesse J. Jones:

Her pose at the beginning is very twinny and straight. If she didn't have a face, her body wouldn't be conveying any emotion.

Sergio Barragan L:

so so

Blond:

I like the setting.