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Danny Kneip:
The male performance doesn't ring true with the emotion in the voice. Nice sync though.
donna:
Love the simplicity, works really well!
Mattie Walsh:
You've made dialogue seem quite different. The poses work well, for the style of animation it's really nice. The acting at the end, it's difficult read what the character means by "one way or the other". Everything else is really good
Aaron Rivera:
Charming! Great art style and fun design, as well as a good story. Even with the simplicity there are some good accents of movement and a nice feel to everything. Great work!
Jesse J. Jones:
Expressions seem unclear. Not sure if the guy is sad, worried, or angry. The girl just seems to have a neutral expression throughout making it strange when tears appear. Try pushing your story poses more!
Bader Ahram:
Love the lisping!
Animator: Nour Ahram
Description: talking over the phone with her friend and scared of telling her boy friend that she is pregnant !
Experience: 3 years
Time taken: it took me to design the charachters, rig them, design the BG, and animate around 10hours