Comments:
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Edward Chris Evjen:
The mans hand gestures would benefit from being more solid. And not floating. Also the clipping of the lady is not good. The shot should include her, or exclude her completely.
Jacob Moreno:
Appealing compsition. The animation is a bit choppy: try to hit poses rather than have it continually moving in no coherent direction. Also, the neck looks broken at the end. Very nice composition though.
Danny Kneip:
Great looking character and unusual setting, but the lip sync is weak.
Michael D. Smith:
too stiff
Stafford Ahartz:
Lip sync is off by a few frames. Just to note. Otherwise, great job
Himadri Sekhar Dhali:
which character is this? where do u get this character?
Aanal Kumar:
need a lot of works.
Jesse J. Jones:
A lot of popping going on and strange face control drifting.
Ruth Agada:
The lipsync needs more work
Christian:
Some good facial expressions, but the timing is a bit strange for most of it. Everything looks a bit too jerky, and could do with smoothing out. Nice effort though!
Sergio Barragan L:
Needs a lot of improvement!
kishan Rathod:
what is this ?? m i lost in this
Animator: Арт Вохилес
Description: Animation on May entery made in Source filmmaker.
https://vk.com/id23017580
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCy0345S95lTxUsX2MTSDyZw
Experience: 3 years
Time taken: 4 hours