Final Rating: 5.02. Finished 60 out of 197 entries.

21 views including the voting period.


Animator: Christian

Description: I'm pretty new to animation, so it's not perfect. Would love for some useful critiques though!

Experience: 5 months

Time taken: 21 days


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The lady's folded arm pose looks a little awkard (might be difficult to achieve with the rig though?). Nice staging and set :)

Danny Kneip:

Nice performances overall and good looking characters. The lip sync could use some polishing for sure, and her eyes pop open at 363, which is distracting.

Jesse J. Jones:

The arm cross on the female in the beginning seems stiff and unnatural. Good work though! :)

Aaron Rivera:

Not bad, though it would've been improved by having fewer cuts.

Menga Nkouka:

the extra wasn't even necessary! (in my opinion)

Lucas Michaels:

Looks really nice, but reminds me of an animation director I had at the beginning of my career that would say "never never NEVER point, it always looks un-natural and forced" I think he was right, its just something to avoid whenever possible.

Also I think just a few more hours spent on the lip-shapes could have really made this animation shine.