Wei Wang:

the inhale mouth action is abit too fast

Jesse J. Jones:

Really great!! Love their lip sync and expressions. Great job! :)

Aanal Kumar:

arcs are missing!!!!

Danny Kneip:

The lip sync is fairly strong, overall, as are the performances. His leaving the frame at 213 while standing up is a very bold choice. The camera eventually catches up to him, but I wonder if that was planned? I also wonder if the male character has the right emotion / expression for the audio. I also don't understand the composition. I know approx. were he is based on where she's looking, but based on his own consistent gaze, you have potentially crossed the line of action and confused me. Again, I think your talent as an animator is very strong and I like this entry quite a bit! Best of luck!

ss543:

top notch lip-sync / facial expressions

Matt Dj:

I like the cheek pop @f94, maybe clarify the movement of either swallowing or popping air out of his mouth and dose accordingly to what you choose. You might like to try only 2 main poses between pose f126 and pose f186, holding those poses and then having only one nice transition. Keep it up!

Gary:

I really like your approach to the man's lines. You got a lot of character into the lip sync which is very appealing. There are some mouth poses that could use a little more settle. And the pose of his initial breath sort of pops into being.

Abhishek Banerjee:

nice

Rob Cavallo:

I love the hand at 170 when he taps the table twice. It really sells the overall dramatic move that follows. His right hand looks very strange to me holding the hat, something not natural about it. I do really like the nostrils flaring as he speaks. He does have that airy delivery. Nicely done

Blond:

smooth!

Monika G:

Some nice subtle gestures here. Really like the two finger taps on the table on 180