Comments:
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Elliot:
Love this one, the lighting ,composition and woman animation are perfect! Just a shame it's difficult to see the mans animation. Perhaps it needed a cut to close or pan in here? just a thought. Great work though!
Wei Wang:
the staging could be better, cant see face on the male
Jesse J. Jones:
Nice subtlety! I think I would like to see more reaction in the girl's face, but that's my preference. Really great job! :)
Daniel Vasconcellos:
Cool idea and setup!
Roger Crown:
Close up on the guy saying the end line......where is my CLOSEUP...........hhrrrrrmmmmm...????????
Nawaz:
Very nice subtle movements. The turn by the woman could've been smoother. Overall the mood is great!
Valentious Williams:
lovely great ,feels like a film noir done well. Man i love this one ,subt;e and to the point .
Gary:
Uncommon in this month's submissions that the woman's acting outshines the man's. Great subtlety in that.
Bailey Easson:
I really like this. The animation is well done and the monochromatic theme fits the mood. The main thing bothering me is that after Her movements are very nicely done, she's a statue at the end. If she could move some it would give it just a tad more life.
Martin Gil:
great!, that man is an asshole!
Avinash Kharat:
good one
Animator: Brooke Wagstaff
Description: Modified Bonnie Rig ©Josh Sobel. Modified Malcolm Rig courtesy of AnimSchool.com
(Oops--next time I'll pay better attention to the final output size so you don't need a magnifying glass. Thanks for looking!)
Experience: 4 Years
Time taken: 1.5 weeks