Final Rating: 6.46. Finished 19 out of 197 entries.

203 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Brooke Wagstaff

Description: Modified Bonnie Rig ©Josh Sobel. Modified Malcolm Rig courtesy of AnimSchool.com

(Oops--next time I'll pay better attention to the final output size so you don't need a magnifying glass. Thanks for looking!)

Experience: 4 Years

Time taken: 1.5 weeks

Comments:

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Elliot:

Love this one, the lighting ,composition and woman animation are perfect! Just a shame it's difficult to see the mans animation. Perhaps it needed a cut to close or pan in here? just a thought. Great work though!

Wei Wang:

the staging could be better, cant see face on the male

Jesse J. Jones:

Nice subtlety! I think I would like to see more reaction in the girl's face, but that's my preference. Really great job! :)

Daniel Vasconcellos:

Cool idea and setup!

Roger Crown:

Close up on the guy saying the end line......where is my CLOSEUP...........hhrrrrrmmmmm...????????

Nawaz:

Very nice subtle movements. The turn by the woman could've been smoother. Overall the mood is great!

Valentious Williams:

lovely great ,feels like a film noir done well. Man i love this one ,subt;e and to the point .

Gary:

Uncommon in this month's submissions that the woman's acting outshines the man's. Great subtlety in that.

Bailey Easson:

I really like this. The animation is well done and the monochromatic theme fits the mood. The main thing bothering me is that after Her movements are very nicely done, she's a statue at the end. If she could move some it would give it just a tad more life.

Martin Gil:

great!, that man is an asshole!

Avinash Kharat:

good one