Comments:
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Jacob Moreno:
Not bad. My advice would be to eliminate so many intricacies between poses. For example the way the girl's hand movements move in a bunch of different directions from point a (holding the man's arm) to point b (clenching her own hands). try to focus on transitions, I feel like that would help the animation a lot. Interesting camera work too. Keep it up!
Jesse J. Jones:
A lof of floatyness going on. Work on your weight and timing. There's also a big pop in the beginning.
Animator: Arik R. Morales IV
Description: The first 3D animation I've done as of yet that I feel the most happy with. But I still have a lot to learn.
Any and all critique is welcome!
Experience: As a student learning it, a few months.
Time taken: Many, many hours.