Final Rating: 3.32. Finished 155 out of 197 entries.

19 views including the voting period.


Animator: Arik R. Morales IV

Description: The first 3D animation I've done as of yet that I feel the most happy with. But I still have a lot to learn.

Any and all critique is welcome!

Experience: As a student learning it, a few months.

Time taken: Many, many hours.


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Jacob Moreno:

Not bad. My advice would be to eliminate so many intricacies between poses. For example the way the girl's hand movements move in a bunch of different directions from point a (holding the man's arm) to point b (clenching her own hands). try to focus on transitions, I feel like that would help the animation a lot. Interesting camera work too. Keep it up!

Jesse J. Jones:

A lof of floatyness going on. Work on your weight and timing. There's also a big pop in the beginning.