philipp seis:

hehe :)

Michael D. Smith:

Needs more expression in the animals.

Lise Minnie:

Good effort on stop motion! :)

Jesse J. Jones:

The jump-cut where we cut to a closer shot isn't a drastic enough change to warrant the camera move. The cats expression also stays basically the same throughout.

Roger Crown:

In clay the colors of the characters must read against the background at all times.......

the cat is a little too dark and his eyes should be lighter blue....but by all means see you in the next comp. for june!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Danny Kneip:

well done. Kind of creepy. The color palate is moody and frames like 350 and 439 could go viral on social media! I applaud your effort!

ss543:

i just love clay/puppet animations! good work! more please!

Clement:

Really good design, really fit to the character:) And good animation, you could stress the intonation within the limitations of your techniques.

Dan Harriman:

Seems a very minimal style which is a nice approach. But it's hard to read what's happening. There are no changes of expression on the faces, at least not visible ones, and I think the faces need more life since the body language is so minimal.