Final Rating: 4.24. Finished 102 out of 197 entries.

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Animator: Jack Kimberley

Description: Creepy guy catches a colleague red handed eating Dave's Cake.

Experience: 6 Months

Time taken: 2-3 weeks

Comments:

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Cory Parks:

I think you wanted to do too many poses. You should consider going simpler next time. Nice Blender cup though :P

Cuck Man:

Wayyyyyy too many things going on at once. And what was with the Blender cup??

Jack Kimberley:

You're the best

Danny Kneip:

Team Blender!!! :D nice, creepy performances. Her opening line seems extremely rushed but her reactions are priceless! His lip sync needs some polish. Just a crazy, fun entry that spices up the competition!! :D

Aaron Rivera:

very funny with great expressions, but I think a lot of the movements are too jerky, even for an exaggerated style like this.

Jesse J. Jones:

Great! Loved that you were able to get that selfie shot in there, made me laugh! :) My general critique would be that some of the actions like him sitting down and her reacting to him happen so fast that they don't really have a chance to read and become strobe-y. Would like to see her notice him first, she seems to have eyes in the back of her head to know he's there. Really good work though!

Gary:

Your ideas are a lot of fun and I like your poses. The man's entrance and exit is a lot fun. I just wish the flow between the poses were more smooth and connected. Some of the limbs seem to have a mind of their own at Times. I enjoy the energetic motion, just smooth out the transitions.

Menga Nkouka:

the man moves too fast, the action is not clear. The woman's expressions are clearly understantable. Like the render