Reza Hadiani:

plus continunity

Danny Kneip:

Decent work, overall. The opening pose is good. The final pose is a problem because his hands are moving, when they should be still, supporting his weight. Good blinking and sync.

Clement:

Try to make strong, dynamic poses and key ALL the main controllers. Here everything moves independently from the rest, it must be a real mess in your timeline:) If "snaps" happen, treat them individually at the end, after making sure your strong poses stand out.

Jesse J. Jones:

His hand doesn't' look like it's resting on anything in the beginning because of the near-zero pose. Try getting hands to look like they're really pressing into the surface they're resting on, whether it's a table or an elbow. :)