Jesse J. Jones:

Walk needs work as well as posing. Practice your fundamentals! :)

Christian:

Needs some polish, but the general idea, and motions of the scene are there. But the body & face definitely still need work done. The walk needs to be a little more smooth, especially the stop, and maybe the arms don't need to swing so much?

At the end, with the arms crossed, the left hand needs to be rotated up, so the palm is resting on the bicep.

Good job though!

Tobias Fuhr:

great animation, but has some points: The character could have more blinks. the animation has a problem about don't have locked poses, the character always is going to another pose and never stop. you are in a great way, keep studying, congratulation for this entry